 | Các bạn giúp mình về bài tiếng anh chủ đề Vietnam tours |
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Hiện tại mình có iết 1 bài pr cho website của mình. ko biết viết câu như vậy có đúng ngữ pháp không. Các bạn check giúp mình nhé. mới học tiếng anh chưa lâu lắm 
Welcome to Vietnam tours 247 - Vietnam is a country any serious traveler should visit at least once in his/her life. We are one of the leading travel agencies and tour operators in Vietnam with many years of professional travel service. We provide Vietnam tour packages, adventure tours, cycling adventure tours, Halong Bay and Mekong River cruises and tours in and around the major tourist destinations in Vietnam like Hanoi, Ho Chi Minh City, Hue, Halong Bay, Sapa, Mekong River, Nha Trang... We keep our promise to respond our value clients within 24-hours. Plan today to explore Vietnam civilization in this beautiful land, friendly people and good foods. Contact us now to get the best Vietnam tours 2011 deals! |
 | Trả lời: Các bạn giúp mình về bài tiếng anh chủ đề Vietnam tours |
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Hi, My English is not good enough to correct everything for you. There are two things I want to say 1. the name of the country. Is it Vietnam or Viet Nam. As Mr. Thach posted in the forum, it should be Viet Nam. So the name of your company should be Viet Nam Tours 247. Should we use the same rule when we mention other proper names like Ha Noi, Ha Long? 2. For the sentence: We keep our promise to respond your value clients within 24 hours. I think it should write: "We promise to respond to your request within 24 hours" Sorry if these comments do not meet your requirement. |